This post is part of the August 2011 Blog Chain at Absolute Write. This month’s challenge is “The Continuing Story of a Song” and is best read in order:
Part 1 (orion_mk3)
You are here.
Part 3 (BigWords)
Part 4 (AbielleRose)
Part 5 (Ralph Pines)
Part 6 (hillaryjacques)
Part 7 (Darkshore)
Part 8 (pyrosama)
Part 9 (Diana_Rajchel)
Part 10 (Inkstrokes)
Part 11 (soullesshuman)
Part 12 (Alyzna)
Part 13 (Cath)
Part 14 (dolores haze)
Part 15 (Alpha Echo)
Part 16 (pezie)
Part 17 (orion_mk3)
Part 18 (orion_mk3)
Part 19 (orion_mk3)
Song: “Dreaming” by Bruno Coulais
Chris had dreamed of meeting someone, or re-meeting someone, at the resort. It had been a naive hope, a young person’s hope, but Chris had clung to it nonetheless, even as the resort side of the island proved to be overrun with the sort of people that didn’t really seem worth meeting. The other members of the group surely disagreed, quickly vanishing into pools and bars and chatting up air-headed sun worshipers or drinking with business tax exiles and the wives they’d seemingly constructed out of strips of leather. The other side of the island was more authentic than any of that – you didn’t need a daiquiri to take the chintzy edge off.
Maybe that’s why the note, tucked under Chris’s door last night, seemed like such a blessing. It was terse, unsigned, and as romantic as one would expect from a postcard or a B-rate movie:
Meet me on the leeward side of the island tomorrow at 8. Take the middle path from the resort and turn left at the masseuse. Got something to show/tell you, something you won’t want to miss.
August 9, 2011 at 8:45 am
“wives they’d seemingly constructed out of strips of leather.” what a great way to describe it!
I love stories with soundtracks. Without the song from Coraline, I wouldn’t have necessarily gotten a creepy vibe, but wow, that’s errie!
August 9, 2011 at 11:17 am
Great start…AND, we’re off! lol
August 9, 2011 at 11:49 pm
Wow, the song certainly does add another facet to the mood here. Love the “as romantic as…a B-rate movie”. Nice work.
August 21, 2011 at 10:05 am
Short, but again evocative. What is the mystery? Plenty for us to explore!
August 21, 2011 at 7:48 pm
Your musical choice adds an otherworldly element to the opening scene. Nice choice!
August 23, 2011 at 1:16 pm
You have so many great descriptions here. I loved the line about constructing the wives out of strips of leather. And the song choice certainly set the tone for the whole story :).